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Listening to your talk now.
Please understand, I'm trying to give some constructive criticism, not knocking anything you did. That said,
- Try to trim it down and hit the points faster. I think your audience will retain the information better that way.
- Try to sound more confident. You know this stuff, and you're presenting new information to them.
(I'm making a couple updates to my talk based on yours. The bicycle analogy for DWL is great.)
still listening...
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Last edited by PaleMelanesian; 05-22-2009 at 01:03 PM..
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