...because I haven't actually *tested* the device myself, I really shouldn't be making comments, but I DO want to feedback these thoughts:
1) the article needs to show some test data that supports the product claims.
2) the pictures should be "referenced" (ie: Fig. 1, etc.) to the text body.
3) the article needs to summarize the product components (ie: a Parts Listing legend, etc.)
...meant as "constructive" criticism only (and hopefully taken only as such).
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