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1) the article needs to show some test data that supports the product claims.
2) the pictures should be "referenced" (ie: Fig. 1, etc.) to the text body.
3) the article needs to summarize the product components (ie: a Parts Listing legend, etc.)
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1. The article does show test data - it says, over a car driven as most people would, I gained a fuel economy improvement of 15 per cent on a particular urban route. I deliberately left it as open as that; there are too many variables in cars, drivers and routes to be more specific. In fact, I did the test really to demonstrate to myself that I wasn't just imagining things, that in fact it was repeatable and the gain was major.
2. We don't run photo captions or specific photo references - most people seem to be able to follow our aticles OK.
3. I don't understand why a parts listing is necessary - it's not a kit.