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Electric cars have arrived and new hybrids are proliferating. As a result, the fuel economy of the average affordable car is finally starting to climb
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By the time I made it to the second sentence he'd lost credibility- kind of a tough start. Then towards the end of the addendum there's this:
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I've probably confused everybody with my back-and-forth calculations, and the incorrect descriptions, but to me, the situation is confirmed (as much as it can be confirmed based on government numbers).
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Yes, there was room for improvement in laying out his logic. So much so, that I don't care what he said or what conclusions he drew.
Start over. Or let someone else do it.