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Originally Posted by lordherald
Comments on the fuel usage Cost chart please.
I need to add a few more labels like MPG for the bottom.
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Some notes...
-Green is a bit overwhelming- maybe have that be a thin header at the top and leave the rest for info.
-Center justify text is hard to read. Try left justify, maybe even in two columns.
-I think we should put the most professional looking builds on the left side, and only use one of each body style. Bondo's F150, 3-Wheeler's Insight, etc. The MX-3 looks to be a photoshop. The white Metro picture is good because it really shows off the mods, while the blue Metro's mods are hard to see/understand.
-Most people don't know what "modding" is. We should spell out "Modifying".
-The graph looks really good and I like how the bars are colored relative to fuel use. I think this can be basically carried over as-is to print.
-Good hierarchy and overall layout. Easy to read- title, graph, photos, copy, tear-offs.
-Tear-offs are short and simple. Good. Make sure the URL is big enough in print.
Is the copy going to cover just some anecdotal stories or will it be a little "Driver's Ed" type thing? Should we trust people to go on the website later, or cut right to the chase?
Looking good. Keep it up!
