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Old 04-07-2014, 09:17 PM   #39 (permalink)
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Hypermiling tips:
increase your fuel economy
and beat the EPA ratings!
Honestly i'm not sure about this part of the text. The purpose of this part should be an invitation. "Hypermiling tips" could be a negative buzzword. Maybe something like "Come join us and," "Start your journey to," etc.

Maybe a catchphrase instead?
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