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Originally Posted by dirtydave
damn 19 names?!
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Nineteen!
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Originally Posted by nimblemotors
Here is my feedback from reading a little of it: well written, easy to read.
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Excellent, I'm glad you thought so.
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Originally Posted by MetroMPG
I liked your Suzuki 1.0 review: fun intro paragraph hooked me into carrying on -- "hell no". 
Appreciated the injection of a bit of humour instead of a bland, by the numbers report. Gives it a bit of personality.
If you're doing this to create a portfolio, make sure you go over your posts with a fine tooth comb. I noticed a couple of run-on sentences, and a dubious "it's" (did you mean "is"), eg: |
Yes I have been trying to hook readers with a short first paragraph so I'm glad that you noticed that. Bland reports are the last thing that I want to be doing so that style will be staying. I'm not really looking to create a portfolio, this is more of a hobby more than anything else but if it goes somewhere I won't stop it.