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It's not correct to begin a sentence with "and", while also not capitalizing the first letter. You've got above average English writing skill though. Most written work is pointless busy work though. Who is going to be reading any of this again? It's like the job exists to write words that must be reviewed by another job, and then filed into a black hole to never be seen again. At least, that's what the worst part of my job is.
My suggestion would be to type up your notes in a word processor that does spelling, punctuation, and grammar correction first, then copy/paste it into your note. Then if she has an issue, tell her to take it up with Microsoft.
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