'motor / engine'
Perhaps you'd like to decide which one it's going to be.
A 'motor'.
Or an 'engine'.
Or, perhaps the energy source, and we'll sort it out on our own, since you haven't.
And how about hiring someone skilled in technical writing, who can manage a linear, coherent narrative, from beginning to end.
Also, the American Bar Association may be interested in your particular talents.
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