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Writing an article on the Leaf, need some C&C
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Tomorrow I'm test driving the Nissan Leaf for an enthusiast website. Not a typical target, and certainly not a typical writer for the job.
My main point is to point out, maybe with some reluctance (we'll see how the car impresses me tomorrow), how electric cars are coming into the scene as more than a novelty or a glorified golf-cart... That it's here to stay, and how it maybe ready for the masses (more than just you as ecomodders, but as an average consumer car). Quote:
Thanks, Phillip |
Watch those apostrophe's! By which I mean the difference between "it's" and "its".
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Nice writing.
Excuse my ignorance, but what's "C&C"? Also, I'm not sure the ICE is actually reaching its limits. There are lots more tricks they can throw at it, but they all ratchet up the cost. EG: HCCI. |
My ADD kicked in too quickly to finish it. Talk about the car, and do it starting in the first paragraph.
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Frank -
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texanidiot25 - Will you be summarizing the Leaf in a new first paragraph after the test drive? CarloSW2 |
Yeah, it... what squirrel? Squirrels are cool.
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Frank -
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http://ecomodder.com/forum/member-cf...chuck-powa.jpg CarloSW2 |
Lolz
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I'm with Frank. There's too much unrelated verbiage unrelated to the Leaf. Potential EV purchasers are not interested in obscure Chevrolets or Porsche Boxsters. To them, the epitome of gasoline engine development isn't a 300 hp FSP, it's something like a Civic HF or a Lotus Elise.
Carburetors is misspelled. Horrific is overdone. No where is one word, and misused. Crises are the plural of crisis. |
Squirrels do NOT look like that around here. It really is amazing how many different habitats squirrels thrive in, and how different they all look. Squirrels are red in Indiana. Is this for Jalopnik? It's probably not for EcoModder.
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