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Originally Posted by dmafanp
it honestly looks like ****, the car it self looks pretty good and just spray paint it grey some something omg, it looks like its been in a massive front end collision, savings is significant i also have a grill block but clown car
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Would you mind adding some punctuation? It starts out decent, you don't care for how it looks, but then it kind of goes haywire. Spray paint what? My temporary design that is going to be replaced? Or the chips and damage to the front bumper?
What looks like the massive front end collision? The front end, chips on hood, or the polycarbonate? Do you mean front end collision with an election sign?
Finally, "savings is significant i also have a grill block but clown car."
You didn't put a period in, but I imagine that was the end of your statement. You put a comma, so I imagine you'd want to:
"separate the elements in a series"
"connect two independent clauses"
"set off introductory elements"
or
"set off parenthetical elements"
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Rules for Comma Usage
But "savings is significant i also have a grill block but clown car" is not clear to me. I even tried typing it, thinking maybe it would be more clear, but it was not.