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Originally Posted by Vekke
First layouts for my business cards can be found:
Which one do you prefer and what would you change?
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I like the white one with the big T, but it needs to have the company name on that side without overcrowding it.
Black seems out of place given what your company will be doing.
If you want black, use the darker green for green texts - it's far stronger when seen against the blackness than the pale green used for the EKO in TUNEKO and the url.
The lighter green could be used for highlights, as it is used on the big logo.
In image series 5, colours are too pale.
Don't fade away. Be bold !
The airflow over the "missing" car is too subtle to be effective, and the logo gets in the way for people to see the car shape.
If you like this design, lower the logo and URL, and make the windtunnel effect slightly more pronounced.
I wouldn't give away 10 tips.
It takes up a lot of space on your cards.
Grab their attention with 1, then try to draw them to your website for more.